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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2002-11-14 06:09 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#84"

Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON


innocence

intertwined
with passing

days

slipped into
years

as another heart


changes

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

© Copyright 2002 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-11-14 07:08 PM


YES!!
Absolutely perfect Mark!
~Hugs~

~Love, like magic, depends on believing~

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2002-11-14 07:29 PM


Nancy:  Thank you kindly.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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3 posted 2002-11-14 07:32 PM


Very nice Mark....very nice. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2002-11-14 07:41 PM


Chris -- I appreciate the Thank you.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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5 posted 2002-11-14 08:39 PM


Ah but did it change in a good way? This has a lot of room for pondering.
Sandra

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6 posted 2002-11-14 09:43 PM



This does seem perfect. It has
a good feel to it. Just right.

Thanks,
Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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7 posted 2002-11-14 10:25 PM


Well, Sandra...  I guess that depends on your definition of  "good"...  I figure, if it makes you grow and be better/wiser for the experience, then it is a good thing...

Pat:  Thank you...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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8 posted 2002-11-15 12:45 PM


knowing nothing
of innocence
changed
days into years

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9 posted 2002-11-15 11:33 AM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Mark, this is so very true, sweet friend, my heart goes out to the many who forsake their innocence and I hope everyone can hang onto a souvenir of it to find inner-peace in the future! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-11-15 11:41 AM


Well done..well spoken...so much said with so few words...

...believe what your heart feels...

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2002-11-15 11:42 AM


Timeless, priceless and captivating.
ThisDiamond

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12 posted 2002-11-15 05:35 PM


So much accomplished in so few words

~ Ruth

If God brings you to it, He will bring you through it.
  
  

MARK V SHELDON
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13 posted 2002-11-15 10:35 PM


Kacy:

Innocentlly
knowing nothing
for years
changed in days

Noah:  I simply hope they can hang on to a souvenir of themselves...

Scorpio:  thank you for the reply.

ThisDiamond:  ...like your reply -- thank you...

Ruth:  ...that is my goal...

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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14 posted 2002-11-15 11:10 PM


Mark,
days turn into
nightmares,
without
innocence

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15 posted 2002-11-15 11:37 PM


never
shall it
be like that

loneliness sings
the saddest songs

and joy
is done in duet
sounds of unison

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16 posted 2002-11-15 11:55 PM


cool x 20 (or less)
MARK V SHELDON
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17 posted 2002-11-16 12:14 PM


Kacy:

Nightmares are but
innocent dreams
revealed...

Hellen:  ...speaking of duets...???

wayoutwalt:  Much obliged.

-MVS

"AS ABOVE SO BELOW"

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