Open Poetry #23 |
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ocean in view |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I had this romantic notion once to be Hemingway vodka in hand ocean in view writing through the demons until, I remembered the part of being alone I’d never mastered it’s lonely if I have to wake up Hemingway, tomorrow could I please still have the view? [This message has been edited by Duncan (10-15-2002 02:32 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I particularly enjoyed the last Stanza... as I read it through your eyes, and need, and then read it through your thoughts... Thank you, Duncan! ![]() |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
![]() That's the closest I could find for an ocean for you...pretend it's the real thing okay? ![]() You can never win or lose |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Yes... please at least make sure I have a view... nicely done my friend. Always a pleasure.. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) And let me have some room to see too as this sure would be a wild fantasy and high life to live! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, your words always reveal such wonderful realms, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
if I have to wake up Hemingway, tomorrow could I please still have the view? --------------------------------- Wonderful Duncan! Especially loved the above lines.. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Even if you did not wake up as Hemmingway on the morrow, you truly would have no need for a view of the ocean, because, Dear Duncan, you could surely write one into being! EA |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Yes, at least allow me beauty... excellent, Duncan, enjoyed! ~Tier ![]() "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
until, I remembered the part of being alone I'd never mastered it's lonely ========================== time after time you write me..... ![]() ![]() and...have to have one at night... oh yes...the night......... ![]() Unknown to us, there are moments when crevices open for time to come alive with begining. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Duncan Any view is not the same, alone. I like the way you write...simple-profound! |
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Auguste![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I'll share my ocean view with you sometime and even my boat. Nicely penned! ![]() The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
well now, this is different for you... but no less for that. it still (of course) has the melancholy view that i always associate with, yet also stretches a bit outside yourself to encompass a layer of intentions. i have to admire that. |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, melancholy...but very effectively written....feels right for the words... Nicely done.. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - yes, you can still have the view, I'll make sure of it, nice write... BC |
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