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In the Dim...under 20
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In the Dim...under 20 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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"beneath the lanterns dim light" your memory pressed against me leading me, slow dancing to the beckoning night M *thankyou BluesSerenade "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
under 20 but over flowing with feel. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hi "C" how are you this morning *s... the world is looking up, but those feelings still wish to erupt..none of them sad..maybe longing, but all in good time.. hugs and thank you M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
longing.... hmmmm.... fingers speak one brush of thought tinting the day hues soft |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
fingers speak one brush of thought tinting the day hues soft eyes skim the lips to soon graze upon the undertone |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
fingers speak one brush of thought tinting the day hues soft eyes skim the lips to soon graze upon the undertone Sponge painting faux designs reminding me of then but it is now and whitewashed gives deny broken easels |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, tender, sensual Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Good write, enjoyed. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
fingers speak one brush of thought tinting the day hues soft eyes skim the lips to soon graze upon the undertone Sponge painting faux designs reminding me of then but it is now and whitewashed gives deny broken easels absorbing the spillover wiping away all imitation allow the source to seed the embrace |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, All right you two. It's starting to feel like duet time! Eh? Good job too. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiles gleefully here, under the lamplight. The duet is lovely. I'm waiting for more. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good, Maureen. I missed you the last couple of days while my computer's been down. Glad to be able to read you again. Thanks for sharing. "Love makes the world go around" ~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (11-14-2002 12:59 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
vandana *s thank you for reading Virginia and Sy, just some small thoughts I wanted to share Larry, every now and then "C" let's loose on my poems and somewhere between the lines I feel challenged to respond  MidnightSun, thanks..it really isn't a duet, just a little playfulness. *s Ethel, thank you for the kind words. I appreciate your comments. hugs M and "C"...somedays you catch me in the right mood |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Oh, to be twenty or less again... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
making me smile....under or over its whats inside ( the mind) that counts.. M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
when you are in the right mood... it is always enlightening... thanks for indulging me. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ahhh you're making me blush... It's always a pleasure to be inspired by you M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and you are far too kind to give me such credit... so I thank you again for letting me play off your words and thoughts. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ok you win... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes I did.... I got to play at this with you  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Methinks we both have too much time on our hands... *s M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
too much on my mind and trying too hard not to give it free reign... sorry if I am annoying you.. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
no never annoying... I had too much on my mind and that is why I wrote the other poem...only I can never recall what the too much is all about..sort of like childhood amnesia... and anyway I did my work for the day...it was a sweaty job raking 4 trees worth of leaves that all fell in the rain in the last two days...new rake and me sort of like having a dancing partner...couldn't resist getting some exercise. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-14-2002 03:09 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
business stuff for me... am doing three things at once ( one of them playing here) and trying to work through changes we are undergoing as part of a restructuring. The dept I run is being downsized...and I have to redistribute the work load as well as arrange for outside support, etc. Also have to decide who is getting let go...so I am trying not to dwell on it.. just let it work itself out in my head without getting emotionally involved in the decisions... playing allow me to distract those emotions. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
awwwwww..well I am sorry for the negative you are dealing with...and here have a few hugs from me  I can understand your frustration  and by the way, now I have a better picture of what you look like. oh and for the record I am really never naked on here I am beginning to like these smilies  [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-14-2002 03:40 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I liked the feel of this. Each time I read it, I enjoyed it even more. EA |
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