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Cast Away!!!!!!
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Cast Away!!!!!! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Let us rise In the sun The sun In the sky The dreams we used to dream Cast away Into wind Cast away into bloom Let us dream again Fill our love in hearts Don't let rain fall on us And cast away our dreams to shine Let us fullfilled our love And dreams that supppose to shine Cast away Don't cast our dreams away Cast away all the pain Let us pray To let the dreams come true And fullfilled my heart again Cast away [This message has been edited by vandana (11-13-2002 06:38 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Vandana, cast away all those things that keep you from having or finding love...and hang on to it once you have it... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And may you only be a castaway in happiness and love forever as you are so deserving of this! (kisson cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love the intensity of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem.. Im going to go cast away like your poem told me to... Cya.. lol I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Well your poem certanly cast me away. Has anyone ever told you that you are good at this? "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vandana! This is wonderful! Thank you for sharing! |
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