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Missing You
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Missing You |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Missing You tonight you are so far away in the hour that should be sleep so I crawl to the space in this bed that normally you keep to the place where only you should be that night reserved for you to reside quietly here I am missing you for tonight you are not by my side miles and miles away from me warm comforting presence that I miss sleep is not all that I lack in the absence of your kiss so tonight on your side I lie awake where you have so tenderly dreamed listening to the silence drip in dark as miles away another heart lies awake and screams I’m not disappointed, I never expected anything from you. [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (11-13-2002 01:04 PM).] |
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Mordecai's Mom New Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 8San Miguel, Ca |
Beautiful. That warm body next to you is easily missed! Mordecai's Mom Beauty by day becomes magic by night...when dolphins dance on waves of light |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
aw shucks...knew I shouldn't have left...Ha! Truly neat write my friend... jwesley |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very Nice Hope you find the warm body you need Till then you might use a pillow To fill the place, just not the warmth Gloom |
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Cherished Angel New Member
since 2002-11-13
Posts 5West Virginia |
I can relate all too well. A beautiful well written write! I look forward to reading more of your work. Cherished Angel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I think we can all relate to this feeling every now and then, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I hope now love is close to your heart and dear, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem. Thanks for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
There's nothing worse than an empty cold bed! I hope the space is filled soon. I enjoyed this, although I'm sorry you're alone! Hugs, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Very sad and loyal. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Lovely Helen. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
"listening to the silence drip in dark as miles away another heart lies awake and screams" Helen, my Gary and I know exactly how this feels. "Love makes the world go around" |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Beautiful, and you've portrayed the yearnings in this write so well... |
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