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Without You
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Without You |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I went walking on the shore line Trying to settle down my mind Without you. I felt the breezes chill once more Wonder what winter has in store Without you I watch the fluffy clouds float by Dancing across the bright blue sky Without you I go walking amidst brown leaves A blanket lent to earth by trees Without you I’ll walk green grasses come the spring Listen to robins as they sing Without you Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sad but very beautiful images of you walking along... M |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very beautiful... |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem... I enjoyed it. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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