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A Mound of Splore
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A Mound of Splore |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Mound of Splore Some would sit a mound of splore Counting beads forevermore Beads of faith that drop in wait Without discourse, without debate It is a form of sophistry Some would say epiphany But all are free to seek their goal And in the process save their soul I cannot say which one gives light Nor can I say which one is right I only say God bless to you And do what ever you must do. For me I sail the chaos sea And watch the stars that wink at me. Let the wind embrace my goal And steer a course to save my soul. So if we meet by chance of stray I wish you well along your way. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"For me I sail the chaos sea And watch the stars that wink at me. Let the wind embrace my goal And steer a course to save my soul." Sy ... meeting you "by chance of stray" was one of the loveliest memories I own. This is a wonderful piece ... I love the flow and phrasing within.  Best wishes and hugs,  /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
So tell me once again what's splore and is it well worth fighting for have you said a mound of frolic now my head hurts - you give me colic If I get it right is there promotion or is it still a strange commotion it's all too well to wish God bless and go your way with tenderness but tell me, tell me, just once more what is this word, this thing called splore  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
You just have my grinning ear to ear with this one. I love it! It is so up and so right! Thank you and the same to you. Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some would sit a mound of splore Counting beads forevermore Beads of faith that drop in wait Without discourse, without debate It is a form of sophistry Some would say epiphany But all are free to seek their goal And in the process save their soul I cannot say which one gives light Nor can I say which one is right I only say God bless to you And do what ever you must do. ======================================== So if we meet by chance of stray I wish you well along your way. ================================ Could these lines be any cooler?? me thinks not   Beads of faith that drop in wait Without discourse, without debate It is a form of sophistry Some would say epiphany ~~~~ It tis the goal of my every day ... to make sure I stray upon you way. To cross the paths of your wisdom's wile I'd walk many a mile to witness your smile. OH yes, I'll free frolic up your mounds of splore ... in ecstasy's explore ... the Eden of your evermore. ~~ *winkiewinkie*   No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, such wonderful philosophy fills your words, you deeply influence us all, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Wonderful morning read! Stop and have some tea with me? ~Morning hugs~ *Enchantress runs off to get dictionary to look up 'splore'*  ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
'...For me I sail the chaos sea And watch the stars that wink at me. Let the wind embrace my goal And steer a course to save my soul...' Sy, this rips at my heartstrings this morning and strikes so personal. Thank you for sharing this. It is now hanging prominently on my refrig. On another note, I have no idea what a 'splore' is and couldn't find it in any dictionary, but it's a great word. Guess it can mean whatever the reader and writer want it to mean. Hugs and I raise my tea cup to you this morning ~~ Marti |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem.. I really enjoyed it.. Thank you for sharing you lovely words.. lol I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
And just what is this thing called "splore", Sy.... I really enjoyed your poem!  ~ hugs from a "sploring" chipmunkLyra |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thanks for the well wishes, Sy, splores and all. (splores???) LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well..I finally found 'splore' in my official Scrabble dictionary... Splore~a carousal next off to carousal... Carousal~A boisterous drinking party Hummm.....now back to see how this fits into the poem.. Thanks for the new word Sy! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart and painter of wisdom’s beauty once more your writing is simply stunning. I love this one darling heart, it is as smooth as silk which slips over my mind like a cloak of wonder. Truly you are excellent and I love it utterly Come and carouse along with me Say goodbye to conventionality Dive into the pleasure dome Let your thoughts to this just roam Fly up to the stars that shine Gather flowers bedewed with rhyme Tease your senses with all of this Wrapped within a poetic kiss Deny the will that tells you nay Come away with me to play Where the world spins into dream And takes a gift of wonders scenes Let me touch the dream once again And wash my soul in pleasure’s rain I love this utterly utterly utterly As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my wonderful friends above. I love you all. I was away yesterday and could not answer each of you. But I will try today to catch up. Thank you again. Sy |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
a splorific poem, Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Mike, I think you count deed instead of beads. Thanks. |
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