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A Girl and The Ghost prt. 4
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A Girl and The Ghost prt. 4 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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The ghost looked at the girl Then he finally spoke, "I could never hurt a soul. Dead or Alive I was always good at making friends. I hardly make any enemies." The girl smiled And she said, "Then a friend in me You shall always have. I bet your girlfriend was the same way. At least I hope she was." The ghost smiled He moved in closer He tried to caress her face But his hand went straight Through it The girl said, "It is okay. That was a cool feeling It was like a shiver Was sent through my spine." The ghost smiled Then he said, "At least I have a new friend. But I so bad want to touch you. I miss my girlfriends Caress so." The girl answered, "Then you can try as much As you want to touch my face. I like the cold feeling. But always know You are my friend too." THE END Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (rises in standing ovation) Yay!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love happy endings, this is a cute and beautiful story, it sure was haunting but in a sensitive and loving way, I love it, thank you so much for this treasure, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank youn for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
So we have come to the end of the four-part Halloween ghost story. It has been a pleasure! EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I almost missed the end to the story. A great ending. I liked this little ghost story Julie. Nice job! |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Yea, I'm the ghost.  What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love the ending, Julie.... and I'm glad he was a friendly ghost  ~ shivery hugsLyra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the_loner_23 - mighty fine write, I'm glad the ghost was friendly with caring... BC |
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