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Tis Time....Haiku
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Tis Time....Haiku |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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Soon the leaves will turn colors The trees will be naked 10-14-02 |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Then it will be time to rake the leaves again. LOL I like this poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Fabulous Sue...how I love those haiku's. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is a cute senryu and I love running through the leaves and rolling in them as though I was a little boy and smelling the crisp breezy air! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Bare trees Trees shiver Cold wind rattles limbs Chills the soul paladin |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, Sue, "Tis Time" and you showed this so well! Linda |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
You just caused me to realize that the trees are quite unique...in that they change colors before they undress! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. [This message has been edited by VAS (10-15-2002 10:11 AM).] |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Tis time for the fall Soon the leaves will turn colors The trees will be naked Pile them together Jacobs cloak cast off to bare Beauty in moonlight In last warm weather Children found playing in there Scatters them to flight. Gloom [This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (10-15-2002 10:20 AM).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
That does it, Smarty-pants Chick - You've overstimulated my kitty kicker haiku impulses! I hope you're happy now! The small kitty meows Here comes Long John's big old boot SmartyPants did it! BTW - I like yours better. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick There is a time for everything. Well done. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, I like the way you painted this picture with not only beautiful colors, but also a touch of gray. Thanks. With Love To All, Ethel/garysgirl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, a nice haiku. Hugs to you, my friend M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Thank you all for your replies! Now to LngJhnAg! DO NOT KICK THE KITTIES! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I can't wait for that time again! |
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