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Open Poetry #23

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Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

0 posted 2002-11-12 07:24 PM

COME HERE

kiss awake
the simmer slumber,
I need to feel
the melt~~

make me weak,
spin me 'round and 'round
I will exhale
in your vacuum,
swallow the dizzy,
and slip-slide on soft cotton
until all that remains
of the scalding
are shadowed images
of a passion
on threadbare shroud~~

it's a black page night
but for the ghost-shine
of a papercut moon,
I slumber,
buried in the backdraft
of a deep dream,
waiting
for the melt

come here,
lay me down~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-11-12 07:28 PM

(sigh) Sooooooooo beauitfully sensual, sweet friend, I love the vacuuming feel of your words here, may your love forever make your heart spin with happiness, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

2 posted 2002-11-12 10:15 PM

A path on the combustable edge of danger. Enjoyed

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

3 posted 2002-11-12 10:29 PM

was drawn in by the handle...very glad I was...puts me in mind of someone I miss, much. Loved it.

jwesley

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2002-11-16 02:05 AM

Enjoyed...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2002-11-16 08:31 AM

quote:
it's a black page night
but for the ghost-shine
of a papercut moon,
I slumber,
buried in the backdraft
of a deep dream,

Oh yes, this is good....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2002-11-16 08:39 AM

This is not good....this is simply very very
good....oh yes it is... the closing lines
really say it all...

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