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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2002-11-12 04:24 PM



There was never enough time,
not for love, not for sleep,
never for reading or writing.
Just driving and striving
to stay civil in space, so
small, too small.

There was always somewhere
to go, somewhere to be, can't
be late for delivery, and I
simply ran out of energy. So
I left to be here, alone
waiting each month for your
return, each month I yearn

and long for you,

I do, and I will, forever
for that's the way love is. Even
in separation, whatever the duration
the love, it grows, it shows,
and we still stay close, for
our hearts still beat as one,
even though miles may be between
oh my love, you're here with me.

WhiteRose 11/12/02

"my reflection becomes me"

© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-11-12 04:44 PM


Such truth cannot be bought or sold...
A smile sent...ThisDiamond

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2 posted 2002-11-12 10:39 PM




(smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, love knows no limits to distance and as long as you hold it dear, it will only grow more golden! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-11-14 06:13 PM


Very uplifting, Anne...
I believe that every relationship has it's own problems.... and distance is definitely one which can be overcome...
best of luck to you
~ loving chipmunk hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

angsana
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4 posted 2002-11-14 08:57 PM


What an endearing heart you have, WhiteRose...
regards2you
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5 posted 2002-11-14 09:03 PM



Anne, so true, for "that is the way love is"...this is touching.

Thanks,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2002-11-14 09:14 PM


TD, thanks so much, the smile was most appreciated.

Noah, as always, your comments touch the heart. Thank you

Lyra, thanks so much dear lady for reading and responding.

angsana, Thank you, how very sweet of you to say.

Pat, thanks so much for your kind response.


Earth Angel
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7 posted 2002-11-14 11:44 PM


Dear rose of white, it appears as though you are pouring your heart out with this write. Very moving and most likely identifiable by many of your readers.

~ Sending you loving pink light

EA

vlraynes
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8 posted 2002-11-14 11:46 PM



WhiteRose~
There is much emotion in this write and
you've expressed it beautifully.
Very nicely penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

WhiteRose
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9 posted 2002-11-15 12:41 PM


Linda, I have been doing a lot of it lately, and it's just really getting on my nerves now.   Thanks so much for the loving pink light..

Vicky, thanks for reading, and for commenting.

passing shadows
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10 posted 2002-12-14 04:00 AM


I almost missed this one...an outpouring of you, yes.
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