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scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

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right...there

0 posted 2002-11-12 01:30 PM

Intent

It's never been my wish to cause pain.
I want only to give you sunshine not rain.
You give your love generously to me.
And I strive to let your spirit soar free.

My love will be a means to nurture.
And provide you a safe and secure future.
I'll make a shelter for your tender heart.
You have my sacred promise we will never part.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-12 01:31 PM

Simple, direct, honest.

Smiling here.

scorpio
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2 posted 2002-11-12 02:01 PM

Thank you, Karilea...I'm glad it made you smile...now if only my Lady would smile when she reads it...

...believe what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

3 posted 2002-11-12 02:49 PM

Dear Scorpio,
How could your lady love not smile
when she reads of your love's intent?
You have placed your heart upon your sleeve here...
and you wear it well, poet sir.
I'll just bet she will read this
and burst into tears of pure joy!
Excellent write.
~Hugs~

~Let your heart guide you...
It whispers so listen closely~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-11-12 03:51 PM

scorpio ~~

'...I'll make a shelter for your tender heart...'

a line to make anyone feel loved and protected.

Marvelous write. Huggles, Marti

"I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP."
Louisa May Alcott

scorpio
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5 posted 2002-11-12 04:05 PM

Enchantress, your comments lifted my soul...
yes I tend to wear my heart on my sleeve...always have...and so far it's still there...beating and loving...I hope my lady will smile for me forever...her joy lights up my life...

...believe what your heart feels...

scorpio
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6 posted 2002-11-12 04:07 PM

Thank you Marti...loved and protected exactly what I was trying to express...I may have succeed...I hope

...believe what your heart feels...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

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Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-11-12 04:12 PM

(sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I just love the gorgeous words you write as I know you will make your love happy forever! (smiles) This is soooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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Michigan, USA

8 posted 2002-11-12 04:18 PM

There is certainly a collective smile brewing to encourage this fair lady.
ThisDiamond

scorpio
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9 posted 2002-11-12 04:20 PM

Thank you Noah....Your replies are so special...I look forward to each and every one of them...my soulmate inspires these words...she is my muse...

...believe what your heart feels...

scorpio
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10 posted 2002-11-12 04:43 PM

ThisDiamond...I certainly hope so!!! Thanks for your encouragement...Much appreciated

...believe what your heart feels...

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2002-11-12 05:22 PM

Enjoyed...James

scorpio
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12 posted 2002-11-12 08:55 PM

Thank you for your support, James.

...believe what your heart feels...

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

13 posted 2002-11-12 09:12 PM

sweet....so very very sweet...

I am a complete sucker for the romance stuff

and this is "right there"

enjoyed this very much

scorpio
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14 posted 2002-11-12 09:20 PM

Thank you, SEA..glad you liked it...

...believe what your heart feels...

angsana
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since 2002-11-11

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15 posted 2002-11-13 12:49 PM

Lovely...very suitable for a proposal too!

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08

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Here, Now, Forever

16 posted 2002-11-13 12:52 PM

This write is great in that you can associate it with a friendship and with a romantic relationship. Just show me the sunshiiiine baby!

Larry C

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17 posted 2002-11-13 01:27 AM

scorpio,
Nothing beats honesty in a relationhip! Nice write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

scorpio
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18 posted 2002-11-13 08:34 AM

Thank you, Angsana, Earth Scorpion and Larry C...your comments and support mean a great deal to me...I appreciate it...

...believe what your heart feels...

Cassie
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since 2002-11-12

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19 posted 2002-11-13 11:53 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem. Great inspiration!

scorpio
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20 posted 2002-11-13 11:59 AM

Cassie...thank for you kind comments...I'm glad you enjoyed this poem...

...believe what your heart feels...

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