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In A Trance
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In A Trance |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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You can curdle fresh milk with a sideways glance, or fire up frozen thoughts, make a lame gal dance. You leave me staring into blue space in a midnite trance. You are the nightengale's song and the lonely loon's wail. You are poetry, sometimes pure, sometimes simple, but never stale. If I could I would attempt to possess you. But you are free to verse me, and that's why I still breathe you in a trance. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Transcending limitations and descriptions with honor... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You can curdle fresh milk with a sideways glance, LOVE THAT LINE!!! talk about an opening catch phrase... wow  or fire up frozen thoughts, make a lame gal dance. You leave me staring into blue space in a midnite trance. =============================== If I could I would attempt to possess you. But you are free to verse me, and that's why I still breathe you in a trance. =============================== VERY COOL RHYMES... Kacy this is a delightful diddy here... wonderful word play and phrasing. was a treat to read aloud. waaay cool & groovy too  No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
I love this. Wonderful writing. . . huggles, Marti "I am not afraid of STORMS for I have learned how to sail my SHIP." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was a lovely ad descriptive poem. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Superb! ThisDiamond |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kacy! This is wonderful writing!! I love this...and I'm keeping it!  ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, sometimes it is just so meaningful to feel it all in a trance and tread softly on it, for it feels so beautiful! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
K o o L my fiend... jwesley |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
What lovely writing!!! unique indeed |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great writing, Kacy... especially the line about curdling the milk...  ~ hugs from a curdled chipmunkLyra |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Enjoyed the read. cheers |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy! ============= But you are free to verse me, and that's why I still breathe you in a trance. ============= How do you do that? You make that sound pretty...well, hot.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling here, in a trance. My transient muse gifted me this one. Thank you, everyone, for your time and kind replies. I enjoyed this one myself  |
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