Open Poetry #23 |
You're All I've Yet To Know |
Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
You're playing in the sand alone And there are castles and memories 'How we skipped stones' And laughed over lapping waves I once fooled the wild blue on Mount Tamalpais It's fun to smile over kissing Geneva On The Lake You're all I've yet to know Whether we're makin up or chained Together still in love We thought never mind being richly-poor We all pass twinkle under starlit eyes In my hopes the sky is everywhere Announcing how love will last. And We run bashful toward glitter; Remembering we're still in love. You're playing in the sand alone We thought never mind Under starlit eyes half kisses, Sideways...opposite stuccoed walls On shadows in the glass. You're all I've yet to know They think never mind but, there are flowery Springs below the mountain, the sun, the blue...you're all I've yet to know etoodog |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Robert...What a tremendous poem!!!! How distinctly your voice flows. This is a masterpiece...the colors and textures all amesh in the wonderment of your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Robert, like the feel of this write. Good metaphors, excellent story within.. Reminds me of another time...many years ago.. |
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