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Raining Cats and dogs (sad attempt at Pvd's humor challenge)
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Raining Cats and dogs (sad attempt at Pvd's humor challenge) |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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The boredom was overpowering, Some kids just fell asleep. We were waiting for an assembly, Out of boredom began to weep. Just when we thought we'd die of frustration, We heard a piercing shriek, An angry cat up on the roof, was screaming (so to speak) We waited for another sound, And suddenly it came, The sound of a dog falling, Obviously in serious pain. Then one after the other, We heard some frightening bumps, And angry dogs and cats, Falling with loud thumps. For a while we felt confusion, Then the speaker phone came on “The assembly will now begin,” We all started to yawn. The cats and dogs kept howling, And one kid raised his hand, “It’s raining cats and dogs out there, All over the land!!” "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, this is so cute, just like your picture is. You sure do have a lot of talent for a young lady your age. Thanks for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Yeah, thanks for being nice, that really was a pathetic poem. Just trying to complete all of the challenges.... "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Liz, this brought back memories of the boredom of certain classes in school. You are a creative, talented writer. Enjoyed this. Thanks and hugs to you, Warm regards, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Liz, I think this is wonderful, sweet friend, I too know some of these boring classes and wish it really did rain pearls all a sudden, writing and rhetoric could use a day like that! (big hugggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, you have such amazing talent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wind, well that's better than it raining Datsun cogs. Imagine those on your roof. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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