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Open Poetry #23

what will you trade

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

0 posted 2002-11-12 01:53 AM

Delicate rusted treasures
with a hint of pyschotic flavor
gaze into the zenith
of quick change linear artists.
Wretched sentinals with
multiple neurotic syndromes
trading complex phrases
for one substantial moment.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-11-12 02:27 AM

Goodness, this is a good poem...with very deep thoughts. Very thought provoking.
Thanks for sharing.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

2 posted 2002-11-12 02:37 AM

Great poem here!
Tammy

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

3 posted 2002-11-12 02:49 AM

Thanks so much! I depend on the kindness of strangers! (was that Scarlette??) lol

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

4 posted 2002-11-12 05:37 AM

Love the long words
well done that man

Take a good look at my face
Well, don't my smile look out of place
look a little closer its easy to trace
The tracks of my tears

Robert Adamson
Member

since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

5 posted 2002-11-12 07:37 AM

I like the trade made here.
"trading complex phrases
for one substantial moment."
I would trade my pen for the moments of silence...always. Thank you.

etoodog

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-11-12 11:13 PM

(sigh) We don't have to trade anything, all we have to do is barter all the love we have, for we only get it all in return in its own mint condition! (big huggssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet K, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

~K
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 104

7 posted 2002-11-13 01:00 PM

Thanks guys!! I'm glad you got something out of it! I'll be hanging in the corner pub if you ever want to come over that would be great! (I post in dark alot too!)

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