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Our Garden Of Love
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Our Garden Of Love |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * My love for you grows stronger Since the seeds of love were sown How I bloom when in your radius A lovely garden we have grown Your touch so soft and delicate Just like the petals of a rose I'm consumed in our love garden Can't you see how well it grows? The buds of love have blossomed Into a beautiful bouquet As the sun shines on this Eden Lighting up this fine display The fragrances here are many And there is color everywhere I watch you take a piece of jasmine And gently place it in my hair We lay beneath the birch tree Until the sun fades from our view And as the moon lights up the night I'll still be lying here with you I am in motion |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sue, there is soft a soft and beautiful touch to your words...very lovely ((hugs)) M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, your gorgeous words of love are always the most wonderful to read, I love the art of Josephine too, yay, may your garden always bloom with all the flowers of the earth, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue, very soft and romantic.. and I love the scent of jasmine. Beautifully done! ~Hugs~ ~Let your heart guide you... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A lovely garden...James |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sue, I adore the picture. The way you incorporated the seeds of love growing with your garden was so good. I loved it ... hugs, Marti |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Sue, I have always enjoyed your poetry, but it seems to me that lately you have moved to a higher plane as far as your flow and rhythm. You have always written from your heart which is your strength; just wanted to let you know I have enjoyed your recent poetry muchly. |
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