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How Bids Thee Tonight?
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How Bids Thee Tonight? |
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Crysania Member
since 2002-09-21
Posts 67Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!) |
How Bids Thee Tonight? Good evening, dearest friend, How bids thee tonight? What journeys have you traveled today? What feats have bowed before your might? Grasped lightly in whispery fingers, What messages do you bring? In a voice than echoes throughout the land, What songs have you to sing? Will you tell me a story, Of magical things unseen? And when I drift to sleep tonight, Of your tales I shall dream. Shall I sit and watch you, As you show me your dance? Trailed by leaves, framed by night, Your swirling, breathless dance? I will listen to your messages and songs, That you have for me today. And watch ‘til night fades into dawn, As you dance the night away. To your stories I will listen, With rapture in my eyes. So tell me, dearest friend, How bids thee tonight? Tis a poem about the wind, tis. I wrote it while gazing out my window one windy, but clear, autumn night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes, I do believe Wind would not mind being caught in a glimpse like this... thank you! |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Uh... wow... Library piece, definately. I have nothing even mildly bad to say about this one  I'm so cute! |
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Crysania Member
since 2002-09-21
Posts 67Lost in a dream. (Please don't wake!) |
Thank you kindly! Do what you want and say what you feel. Those who matter won't mind and those who mind don't matter. (Forget who said that...must find their name.) |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*smile* You're a very descriptive writer, and write beauty into vision. Well done. Kielo |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it, I love the wind so much and to me it is always as if a lover is wailing to you from the distance like a siren singing! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, I love the gale of your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crysania, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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