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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-11-11 06:21 PM


My love is never ending
takes me through each night.
If heart be torn, I
still will rise, to capture
morning's light. I've much within
that tenders one, all bookmarked
paths complete, echo thoughts, mine
penned on blue, stained yours
until we meet...a test
of time, words in rhyme.


Maureen

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-11-2002 06:21 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-11-11 06:26 PM




(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it! You did it wonderfully with a fabulous voice complementing it too, BRAVO, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-11-11 06:26 PM


enjoyed
Wind
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3 posted 2002-11-11 06:28 PM


Beautifull, this challenge has really brought about some great poetry, lad to have started it. I am glad to see that you gave it a try- better late than never..... Loved it, good job, no repeats or anything!

"Sticks and stones will break my bones,
But words will break my heart"

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2002-11-12 09:54 AM


thank you all...just needed a little
inspiration

M

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