Open Poetry #23 |
She Sang |
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
She Sang He stroked, absolute, the right emotion and thereafter dwelt in her such commotion that no longer the thrumming of the ocean could match her outpour of devotion ~ ~ and she sang ~ O profound was this reverberation, met it, she did, with quickened celebration, had you taken heed, heard the ring, Cause for ovation! As it stood in time with His ultimate creation when she sang. Ne’ermore then, shall passion dwell in quietness, for thereby its swell shall increase through sweet, harmonious belle and chime forth, their love to tell in her song. ~*~ Revised repost from 10/00 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You sang her song so well! EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well that was lovely - but what were you listening to? Had to be Celine Dion |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Ne’ermore then, shall passion dwell in quietness, for thereby its swell shall increase through sweet, harmonious belle and chime forth, their love to tell in her song. (smiles) Yay!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, it is amazing how beautiful a song one can croon when love consumes ones heart and changes ones life around, this is splendid, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-14-2002 05:36 PM).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I'm saving this one. This is beautiful, Karilea. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
With the voice of a Kansas meadowlark, she sings her song of love, Not with the words of mortals, but odes from high above, she sings the song of muses fair, she sings her song sublime, this poetess from the Kansas plains, who gifts us with her rhyme. btw, enjoyed the poem. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And you m'dear sing like a nightingale. Beautifully expressed Karilea. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Karilea, how do you manage to keep coming up with such beautiful pieces time and time again. Must be something in the air in Kansas or all that wheat! This is just unbelievable. A keeper for my notebook. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A beautiful, melodic piece that swells upon the soul in endless notes of sweet harmony. A wonderfully crafted poem that should live on as a classic. ***Ivy Rose |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karilea, You sing of love so well, Of which song I hope you tell. Lovely piece. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Sunshine...James |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
~and a poet sang~ This is absolutely beautiful, Karilea. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-12-2002 03:20 AM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such an outpouring of beautiful notes, of the cooing white dove....as she sings and flies, soaring high... Good Morning Kansas... |
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