Open Poetry #23 |
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"TWENTY OR LESS...#78" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#78" Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON unclothed seasons whisper blowing silky shivers embracing frosted faces "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
imagery...alliterations.. word play.... so much in so few words...well done poet sir. good to see ya back in the forums Mark ![]() No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must agree with JM. a nice twist of words, bringing to mind several thoughts. |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
to borrow a quote... as above so below... I'll echoe the moth here... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hi Janet! ![]() Barry, I appreciate your feedback and writing. Thank you. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you Ron. "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Finally, a chill I can openly embrace. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Embraces should be none other, Kacy... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (smiles) I just love the whispers in your words, sweet friend, they are like the tinsel that polishes every image you portray, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Noah: ![]() -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fantastic imaging, Mark!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
naked the flavor of Wynter's nearness stirring the flush welcoming the touch M playing with words.. ![]() [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-14-2002 10:59 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Virginia... I keep trying. Maureen: There's something warming in a Wynter chill... ![]() Sy, I appreciate your read and comment. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (11-14-2002 12:14 PM).] |
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