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Final Gong
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Final Gong |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
The sentinels are guarding all the gates and all the crocodiles are in their moats. I clearly told that sentry he should wait until I had secured my herd of goats. But simpleton as he has always been, instead he sounded the defense alarm. And when I catch him I will break his chin and crush his hard-boiled head with my fat arm. I'm not a violent man. Don't get me wrong! I am considered comely and genteel. But I assure you that's the final gong that birdbrain will set again to peal. And there he goes upon the balustrade. With a smiling face and soaking up the shade! [This message has been edited by Radrook (11-11-2002 12:43 AM).] |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
I love to read your poetry Radrook, especially since I have to look things up and then think about it more deeply, keeps me on my toes! lol. This, is excellent, as usual. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Radrook, I like this. You wrote it quite vividly. I could almost see the goats running wildly. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thank you both for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed. God bless! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Wow!!! Oh my gosh, this is poignant, you really had to make me cover my ears reading this with the might of your swing on the brass! (big hugggsssss) This is powerful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Thanks for the accolades! I wrote it as a humorous piece. I guess my sense of humor is rather idiosyncratic since no one yet has even as much as giggled. LOL Thanks for feedback. God bless! |
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