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In the Myst |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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thoughts reigning down on my damp world waking me a chill infiltrating the enemy's hold invading until the edge of sleep disappears and I am forced to open eyes to a new day I am revisited with those fears of mirrored eyes staring blank in silence wishing for a voice to sound the sirens for the faithful to emerge to mend what ails and leave me untitled for the day "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
untitled for the day? how could you ever be left untitled? Nicely done... M'Lady.... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...like a clockless purgatory of patience... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey "C"...it's raining here, and although we need it, it leaves me feeling a little bit dreary and mindless *s Mark, I was a little short on words this morning, although not 20 or less  Thank you Both M |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Here, let me slip those thoughts from your shoulders and dry this drizzled day off your neck a cup of soup and tea? Warmth exist you know in the center of things long thought cold Earl Grey or Irish Breakfast? I have a recipe here for scones so perhaps instead of soup you'd like them with jam Sit a while... and whisper if you wish but talk of things good and bad I'll prepare a dish |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just a moment to spare before I get into some warmth..you are pretty exceptional...I hope you know that... thank you, your words always have a "lifting" effect. M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem. I like the way this is done. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Maureen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, though I never would like to feel untitled, I can understand those moments where you just want to dissolve away and feel free as liquid and slide into vapor! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet frined, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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