Open Poetry #23 |
Always A Dreamer |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * * I have always been a dreamer For the most part of my life Even now I'm still a dreamer 'tho I'm a mother and a wife I allow my mind to wander Back to days of long ago When romance was the ultimate And like a river love would flow Through my pen I write my feelings Of sensuality and desire I may write of two young lovers Making love beside the fire I write of love that's timeless Like that of Romeo and Juliet Of a love that fills your senses Once the course of love is set Sometimes I write of fiction Maybe of love that has gone bad You may feel the pain and heartache Which might make you feel so sad Love fills my heart with wonder And it's given me wings to fly As I explore all things romantic And attempt to make you sigh I am in motion |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome work Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And you never fail to make us sigh as I truly think you are one of the true modern Juliets of romance! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always make me sigh as I am a dreamwer too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thats nice. Never let age slow you down. some people think that you lose your imagination as you get older. I hope you aren't one of them |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
You certainly do a remarkable job of showing us the many sides of love. I enjoyed this poem. ***Ivy Rose |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, You forgot to mention that you do it VERY well. Nice write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And you write so very beautifully! Love this one Sue...and I'm keeping it! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - this write indeed made me sigh, more than once... BC |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, this is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your "dreaming" with all of us. I enjoy it very much, as i'm sure everybody does. Thanks. With Love To All, Ethel...garysgirl |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
~Sigh~ Big smile, Warmly, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always make me sigh |
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