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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-10-14 07:57 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * * *

I have always been a dreamer
For the most part of my life
Even now I'm still a dreamer
'tho I'm a mother and a wife

I allow my mind to wander
Back to days of long ago
When romance was the ultimate
And like a river love would flow

Through my pen I write my feelings
Of sensuality and desire
I may write of two young lovers
Making love beside the fire

I write of love that's timeless
Like that of Romeo and Juliet
Of a love that fills your senses
Once the course of love is set

Sometimes I write of fiction
Maybe of love that has gone bad
You may feel the pain and heartache
Which might make you feel so sad

Love fills my heart with wonder
And it's given me wings to fly
As I explore all things romantic
And attempt to make you sigh

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-10-14 07:58 PM


Awesome work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-10-14 07:59 PM




(smiles) And you never fail to make us sigh as I truly think you are one of the true modern Juliets of romance! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, you always make me sigh as I am a dreamwer too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Wind
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3 posted 2002-10-14 08:11 PM


Thats nice. Never let age slow you down. some people think that you lose your imagination as you get older. I hope you aren't one of them
Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2002-10-14 08:12 PM


You certainly do a remarkable job of showing us the many sides of love. I enjoyed this poem. ***Ivy Rose
Larry C
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5 posted 2002-10-14 08:15 PM


Sue,
You forgot to mention that you do it VERY well. Nice write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-10-14 08:26 PM


And you write so very beautifully!
Love this one Sue...and I'm keeping it!
~Hugs~

~ Time has cast a spell on you
  So you won't ever forget me ~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
7 posted 2002-10-14 10:09 PM


Suetang - this write indeed made me sigh, more than once...

BC

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8 posted 2002-10-14 10:14 PM


Sue, this is so beautiful. Thanks for sharing your "dreaming" with all of us. I enjoy it very much, as i'm sure everybody does. Thanks.


With Love To All,
Ethel...garysgirl

regards2you
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9 posted 2002-10-14 10:16 PM


~Sigh~


Big smile,
Warmly,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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10 posted 2004-05-03 04:04 AM


you always make me sigh
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