Open Poetry #23 |
That special day |
Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
When the day seems never ending and the time is all your own When the hours are consuming with no thought that you’re alone When peace has found it’s calling on a day blessed with reprieve You’ll find just true fulfilment, one of such you’ll not believe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many ways to look at this, Rick, as you so often do, you fling open many windows... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick A good write and read, enjoyed. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Yes, one window is enough to establish a fulfillment as you let the light shift in and gradually other windows will open ajar as the understanding grows! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rick, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Rick. I like this a lot, but, I am going to take it literally, and can only say 'that day', which is rare, is usually spent on the couch, reading a good book, sometimes, the Good Book, but usually not.....just a good book, or watching an old movie, the kind so good that usually lull me right to sleep... Oh, and it MUST be raining outside! Hope I did not misconstue your meaning.(smiling) Thanks, enjoyed... Warm Regards, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Sunshine, your reply sings to my heart, I so appreciate your comments. Seymour Tabin, thank you for the reply, I always enjoy your response. Noah, thanks for the reply, it is wonderful how you reply to so many poets in Passions, you have a heart filled with sharing and the gift of ever caring. Great to hear from you agian. Pat, you have got the meaning just right, when a day is all you would like it to be and more. I am glad that you enjoyed and replied so nicely. Thank you to you all. Sincerely Rick |
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