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Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

0 posted 2002-11-08 01:34 AM

Runs for miles along a pure stream,
Delivers a punch in the moon light,
Cradles and cares not if kids be right.

etoodog

[This message has been edited by Robert Adamson (11-08-2002 01:40 AM).]

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

1 posted 2002-11-08 01:40 AM

Is this describing an abusive father?

What does the stream along which the kiss runs represent?

Thanks for sharing.
God bless!

[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-08-2002 01:41 AM).]

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

2 posted 2002-11-08 01:43 AM

It's about how a father protects his children from the ills of society. Thank you.

etoodog

Connel

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since 2002-11-04

Posts 736
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-11-08 10:53 AM

Well.. It was good. But it dont tell that its the father doing it.. Its way to short and not enough information.. Try making it bigger, and add some more info.. It sure will help.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-11-08 11:48 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, this is so well said, sadly the world is such a dangerous and sad place for children to grow up in today and I only pray we can still have a huge share of good fathers to help their children be strong and embrace the world with hope! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

TradingSpaces19
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since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

5 posted 2002-11-10 10:21 PM

good poem thanx for sharing

andrea

Sandpiper
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

6 posted 2002-11-11 08:40 AM

Too often we get caught up in the words and less in the meaning---this one said it quite clearly to me---it is all a father's kiss should be, and then some!

"I want to do with you what spring does with the cherry trees."
Pablo Neruda

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2002-11-11 08:51 AM

Robert,
Common symbols are hard to find. Enjoyed the read.

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