Open Poetry #23 |
Choose to Understand |
leafseranade Member
since 2001-07-06
Posts 118Wisconsin, USA |
..and he opened his world up to a little boy who couldn't understand ...and the boy grew up to be a man ...and he opened his world up to a woman who wouldn't understand ...we don't at first but then we learn and then we choose to understand |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This is so lovely, sweet friend, it is wonderful how we can make such cavalier transitions and open our hearts to the beautiful gems of life! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I like the "circular" feel of this poem -- it's like a cycle of perpetuity... until one chooses to change. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Interesting poem, to choose or not to choose. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like it, yes |
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