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Your Secret
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Your Secret |
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DarkBlossom New Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2 |
I've kept your secret, never letting on to none, or no one what you do under cover of madness, creating the sadness. That being the state of perpetual me. A secret dark, I suppose who really knows none but the safe in the comfortable place of distance from us, from me. Never within the circle of deceit, of my defeat. I admit I'm beat, a coward I remain discreet. ~DarkBlossom~ |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
I can't figure out the meaning of this, but then again, I don't really feel I have to. I like it, especially the last stanza Julie |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your first post and will be looking forward to more. I hope you enjoy your time here, we are a friendly crew.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to these blue pages, where your secret is safe. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssss) I can understand how difficult it can be to hold a secret true yet feel hurt at the same time, my heart goes out to you and know here all your secrets are respected and held dear, this is a powerful debut, I LOVE IT!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Dark Blossom, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DarkBlossom New Member
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2 |
Thank you for the nice welcome. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Welcome to Passions. This is a very nice debut piece. I know about those secrets. It's hard to keep them.  [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-08-2002 09:17 AM).] |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
nicely done and welcome to passions.  make yourself at home. good write. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
DarkBlossom, WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY I hope that you'll like it here. I look forward to reading much more of your work. (BTW your secrets are safe here at PIP. You can tell what you want to, and not tell what you don't want to reveal. Everyone will love and accept you, regardless.) "Love makes the world go around" |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
You are no coward, I see you on the precipice of revelation..........give it up...go 'head. Welcome |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. I really did enjoy this poem.. Im gonna add it to my library. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
WOW! I can tell you I can relate too well to this. Welcome to Passions. I look forward to reading more. |
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