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Bonfire
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Bonfire |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn 
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If this is over We should let it be over If we’re really done Then I’ll have mine Very well done We can stand in the center Of this trysting place And burn it to the ground Invite friends and neighbors To see us consumed Within the conflagration And weep with us |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
no *turning away* the poem though...... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Perhaps you will be a Phoenix? I feel the heat of your goodbye. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Love always burns twice - once at the start and once at the end ... Don't let your bonfire burn you to much sweet poet as you have a talent the world will miss . Great poem, I enjoyed reading it . L.of.L. Tom . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ouch. |
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