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Faye Junior Member
since 2002-11-04
Posts 14The world of Dreams&Memories |
This started off as an e-mail to a dear friend of mine who hasnt resonded to my letters. I suppose I got a little carried away, and wrote a poem. I hope you enjoy. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Let me know your alive Tell me your thoughts and your dreams Tell me your darkest secrets I want to know your sick and twisted mind Or has it left with your hope? Did it melt away with your happiness? Or have you just died? |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Frustrating disappearance and non-communication, forces one to fill in the blanks.....seldom in a positive way. Enjoyed |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
When we are not in touch we sometimes worry so very much. Your caring is evident in your wonderful verse. Well done. |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Faye, I'm really enjoying your pieces. I too have several people I haven't heard from in a long time and my imagination runs wild at times. Dawn |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
nope, you couldn't possibly get too carried away here!!!! We all enjoy your gifts to us, and I especially like the feelings in this one...great job too! Pen how you truly feel... |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
The title is so matched to the body that everyone should be allowed to have this available to send. It woke me up and if I were your friend then I would have to reply... Thank you. etoodog |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
....relating to this, I have a friend I'd like to send something like this to....but the silence of goodbye is too loud...very well done  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Faye... I'm enjoying your work. ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Faye, Nice poem i really enjoyed it. And welcome to passions! ( sense i never got a chance to greet you yet ) I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
i believe i have greeted you, but if not welcome! Wow, what an entrance you have made. If that doesn't get them, nothing will. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Faye, I think we can all relate to this so well, sweet friend, I have old friends and teachers who never contact me anymore and it can be kind of heartaching yet I still hang onto the hope there is a good explanation why! (sigh) I hope soon your friend replies, sweet friend, I send comfort angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Faye, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
oh i know this feeling all too well...  you expressed your emotions in a very well thought out manner. nicely done. /jen/ what if they gave a war, and nobody came... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know. It hurts. |
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