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The Gift Of Today
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The Gift Of Today |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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When I wake up in the early morning the first thing I notice is your arm around me sleepily I enjoy the warmth of your body I open my eyes to see your silhouette in the dark close to me… a reality this time no dream… but true so wonderfully true… slowly I kiss you awake treasuring the thought that the gift of today is waiting for us… |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!! So much so that it is going to find a home amongst my 'keepers'!! What beautiful, warm, and happy feelings I found within your words........great job!! Pen how you truly feel... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and I know this happiness will fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I'm so happy for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is BEAUTIFUL! Very much enjoyed. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Neeraja~ This is a lovely write. Very nicely done.  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh this is so special. And how very true a statement, 'the gift of today' awaits us all. Wonderful write ... hugs, Marti |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
nice write and nice thought . . . "the gift" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
This write gives me a feeling of being on top of the world. A feeling I have not remembered since my last guru. Thank you. etoodog |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Well this poem is so lovely... Enjoyed. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
A poem filled with love and thankfullness. Thanks for sharing. "Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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