Open Poetry #23 |
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Silhouette and More |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Silhouette and More Windows bared, but for the twilight Clustered shadows, watching, hid. Movement dusting, slight to incite The view of softness, tempting bid. Silhouette, her edges showing Finely detailed, outlined curves. Eyes in follow, slowing knowing What she holds there, in reserve. Waiting for inviting moment Time will show its face, one day. Out of hiding, sent from torment Velvet blessings, she'll convey. Silhouette transmits desire Eyes watch eyes, ignite the fire. ~~*~~ To understand the inner workings He for she becomes the norm. Pain results in more of pleasure To her wishes, must conform. Into the shadows, hand is reaching Interwoven fingers' need. Wordless moments strike the blinded Intensity, the body's feed. A lifetime, need not be forever Time's allotment has its place. Valued more for trust in loving Tucked away, your dark embrace. Silent thoughts of his in borrow Rise to meet the next of morrow. ~~*~~ Share the path that's laid before me Unto you my promise holds. Experience what dreams are made of Mixed emotions scribed in gold. Fail not ever, come the moonbeams Children, We, of starry nights Float away on stolen moments Touch to fade, come morning light. What is love, but heartful sharing Intense desire, attracted to. Rise to meet me next to morrow Camouflaged in thoughts of you. Then eyes to eyes, I shall convey The me of more, your hold, to stay. ~~*~~ M *my own little milestone "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
That's a wholesome mind-full of reading, thought, and impressions... I sense many folds in this one, though the first round is especially curvacious... ![]() -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Well Mark, the first poem was written awhile ago the next two tonight...all in all they are saying...tomorow is yet to come but when it does...it will be well worth it...for someone. ![]() Thank you anyway I was trying to make a "mark" on my slightly over 6000th posting, doing it quietly as it usually goes unnoticed. M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-08-2002 05:47 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"Fail not ever, come the moonbeams Children, We, of starry nights Float away on stolen moments Touch to fade, come morning light." ![]() ![]() ![]() BRAVO!!! Oh Maureen, this is excellent, the form, the thoughts, everything! (kiss on cheek) CONGRATULATIONS ON 6000, sweet friend, we are all soooooooo proud of you, yay! This is a true milestone and labor of love, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! ![]() ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
C-O-N-G-R-A-T-U-L-A-T-I-O-N-S on 6000 posts!!! This is really a milestone with such beautiful poetry. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts and feelings with us, Maureen. "Love makes the world go around" |
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bslicker![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"Then eyes to eyes, I shall convey The me of more, your hold, to stay." That's is what keeps me reading all way to the end.. Enjoyed Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. Bernie Slicker [This message has been edited by bslicker (11-09-2002 01:33 AM).] |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Great Write!!! so very much enjoyed ~~ Connie~~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Noah, I am sort of satisfied with this positive poem and I am happy that you could share my thoughts *s hugs M and thanks on the milestone... Thank you Ethel for sharing my words with me. ![]() Bernie, glad you could enjoy my thoughts. Connie, Hi there, thank you. Hope you are well. M |
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