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"TWENTY OR LESS...#74"
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"TWENTY OR LESS...#74" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"TWENTY OR LESS...#74" Copyright 2002 by:MARK V SHELDON shadows hide inside glass trees we seek to catch them then let go "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm smiling at you!!!  I must sharpen my pencil Mark! Excellent TOL! ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (11-08-2002 05:01 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A compact little write with big impressions. ThisDiamond |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Glass shadows hold no warmth but shattered we lose ours Trees limbed reach grasp for heaven but leaves drop with changed season always apleasure to read your words my friend... and play with the thoughts they leave... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Glass shadows hold no warmth but shattered we lose ours Trees limbed reach grasp for heaven but leaves drop with changed season always apleasure to read your words my friend... and play with the thoughts they leave... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Nancy: pencils are too temporary -- use a pen and stay a while  ThisDiamond: as long as the impressions are good ones... Honored and flattered, Ron... I have learned much regarding minimalism and juxtaposition from your work. Thank you for the word-play. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Aha, now with all the leaves gone, I can see them! (smiles) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, I just love the many illusions and faces of your writing, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My goodness !!! Mark, you are GOOOD at this. I really am enjoying reading them. "Love makes the world go around" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Noah: they're still leaving, but now we can see through what's left behind. Glad to have a fan. Thank you. Ethel, I thank you for your encouragement. There'll be more tomorrow. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You ALWAYS leave us thinking... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hidden secrets in glasshouses break from within |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, 74?! You have a way with this style. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sunshine, I would have it no other way... Kacy, perhaps if the glass house is stained, the secrets can camouflage within its mosaic...? Can you believe it Sandra? And it all started as a simple little experiment... (doesn't it always...?) -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mark, you must be referring to the White House. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Good one, Kacy... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice, I liked it a lot...I like ones that make me think |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you kindly... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
ahhhh--I've been looking for shadows in all the wrong places!! Lots said in 20 or less!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Sandpiper: seek and you have found. Thank you for the stop-by. -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark The illusive thought is more enchanting to try and catch as yours |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
or is that allusive? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Martie -- let's make that "inclusive" since every individual interpretation counts towards the bigger picture... -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
shards prism silhouetting salvation |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
facade facets refracting salavation -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
today’s sunlight dances glass wounded yesterday |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Mark...you do these so well...I like succinct verse at times...you inspire us... ...believe what your heart feels... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hellen: Cobalt glass empathizes with a blue heart -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Scorpio: that's a compliment of the highest order -- to inspire another... thank you  -MVS "AS ABOVE SO BELOW" |
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