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BabyGirl721
Junior Member

since 2002-11-07

Posts 12
California, USA

0 posted 2002-11-07 01:55 AM

This pain driving me crazy
Pushing and pushing
When will it go away?
This pain killing me inside
Harder and harder
When will it go away?
I've been feeling this pain
for so long
Never going away for one
second
Always there,
Making sure I know it's
there
Oh, I know it's there
This pain is killing me bad
It won't go away
What the hell is this pain?
Will it ever end?
Will it leave me in peace?
Pain?!?
Go Away!!!
Now!!!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2002-11-07 02:38 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry and I would like to invite you to check your email for a pleasant surprise. Your poem speaks to a lot of people I am sure who suffer chronic pain whether physical or mental and does it well. I hope you will look around the site, and familiarize yourself with the various forums, and if you have any questions at all please do not hesitate to reach one of the moderators who will be glad to help you out. Again, welcome.

A smile costs nothing, give one away and make someone rich.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-11-07 04:05 AM

I like...the writing...not the pain...James

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

3 posted 2002-11-08 05:21 AM

Pain can be annoyingly all pervasive.
God bless!

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-11-08 11:22 AM

Welcom to passions. I also liked your poem. You described the pain very well.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-11-08 09:37 PM

(big hugggssssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I know this pain ever so well too and now the worst of it has subsided and I know soon time will ease the hurt and true comfort will find your heart as He has a plan for all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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