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Within The Air Delight
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Within The Air Delight |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Crystal snows delight the air and touch the ground in moist Spoken in a peaceful white with every thought well voiced Familiar stillness saunters down returning to be known A look at winter to be told, in frosty autumn shown November in the falling stage of colors bright and clear Spells cast upon the landscapes coat in tale of winter near Forever in the storybooks, o’er rivers and through the wood A look at winter dressed its best, well heard and understood Eternally this time of change, this time preludes in peace Such calm befalls the glen and grass, don scarf and winter fleece Familiar to this heart returns these images of white As crystal snows fall softly down within the air delight Copyright Kkh 11/6/02 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this had me picturing a Snow White fairytale and running as a little boy making snow angels, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Very, Very Beautiful poem... I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Kathleen, this is a magical write wonderfully done. Splendid read, enjoyed.  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And the Queen of Snow returns slowly to her warm and humble palace....after another waltz with her King.....as white leaves of crystal fall upon the eyes of blue....and eyebrows raise to yet another thought... another dance in Winter's waltz... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
This ~is~ like right out of a story book. I love it and can re-read and just get more and more pleasure from it. Very exceptional. Enjoy a great deal. Thank you, Warmly, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Kathleen, This is a beautiful poem. I am not looking forward to snow just yet, but have enjoyed your poem immensely. Dawn |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a beautiful poem. |
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ccvulture Junior Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 16 |
This throws light and warmth into winter, which is always nice for readers. You could try cutting the rhymes out as an experiment to see if you can make it still as jolly. CCV |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ThisDiamond The way you write it, it must be so very beautiful! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling |
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