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Open Poetry #23

On Quiet Nights

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

0 posted 2002-11-06 05:47 AM

On quiet nights,
when thoughts
careen through saddened minds
and sage and prophet
succumb to wondrous signs,

I envision myself
beneath
shrouded skies
where you
dispel
the
gloom
like a glorious morning star.

[This message has been edited by Radrook (11-06-2002 06:48 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-11-06 07:07 AM

Claiming this as a

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-11-06 07:10 AM

Radrook, such talent shines through your work.
Thanks for sharing with us.

Love makes the world go 'round (unkown)
with love and hugs from Ethel

Robert Adamson
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since 2002-10-21

Posts 328
PA/USA

3 posted 2002-11-06 08:10 AM

You surprised me with a morning star and I'm appreciating the sight. Thank you.

etoodog

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-11-06 08:41 AM

where you
dispel
the
gloom
like a glorious morning star.
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Lovely thought here..much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-11-06 09:17 AM

Aw.... I love this! The final lines were perfect...

Warm Regards,
Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

6 posted 2002-11-06 02:23 PM

Thanks to all for the responses!
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
God bless!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2002-11-07 04:14 AM

Excellent...James

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

8 posted 2002-11-07 04:25 AM

Glad you enjoyed the poem James!
God bless!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2002-12-26 02:58 AM

I've had many of those quiet nights. Peace.

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