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Her One True Food Is Love
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Her One True Food Is Love |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Her One True Food Is Love Harmonious words reflect upon life’s treasures Each moment in time a precious gift to behold Radiating silhouettes of two lovers engaged in conversation. Once a starving child frozen within society’s time frame Nourishing morsels of emotion just beyond heaven’s door Enraptured within a soul once frightened and alone. Timeless journeys of past and present combine cosmically Relishing touches of love’s sweet embrace upon her skin Unlimited possibilities surround an aura of completeness Elaborating upon unknown adventures of the future. Forgotten pains of life’s yesteryear buried deep Occupied by an oracle once thought closed to love Opportunities of love’s passion just beyond tactile reality Dejected and unaided she succumbs to exhaustion Imperishable serenity removing all pangs of hunger Symphonic music receptive upon desirous ears Leaden days occupy a lifetime of depression Obstinacy conquered mundane passages of time Valiant waves of thought becoming her destiny Energizing her spontaneous vocalizations remarking…. Her one true food is love. [This message has been edited by Nan (11-10-2002 02:12 PM).] |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Beautiful!... Very great poem! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Dawn, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) This is precious, sweet friend, you always express your thoughts so vividly, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Enjoyable read and ended right where I wanted it to. Thank you. etoodog |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Dawn I really enjoyed reading these words from your talented pen and the ending said it all, beautiful! Take care....Sue I am in motion |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Timeless journeys of past and present combine cosmically Relishing touches of love’s sweet embrace upon her skin Unlimited possibilities surround an aura of completeness Elaborating upon unknown adventures of the future." I'll have to echo everyone and say beautiful! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, this is very beautiful and well written. Thanks for sharing this with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Dawn, You have done a wonderful job on this acrostic. Seems these are so easy for you, I wish I could do them. I honestly do believe that one day you will find that special someone. Until than keep writing these fabulous poems. Thanks for sharing here with us. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Dawn, this acrostic turned out fabulous! Great job girl! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Not only an accomplished acrostic... but excellent employ of vocabulary and imagery. very well done poetess Dawn!! No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dawn you did it! A wonderful acrostic! I'm glad you were able to find just the right words! |
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