Open Poetry #23 |
Inside of Seymour's Head (repost as a thank you to sy) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I need a quick vacation-- comforting as fresh baked bread. a pillow of soft place to land inside of seymour's head. There, the world is magical. Butterflies fly free. There I do not have to fight to find serenity. Gentle, as a whispered wind. A warm hug from a long lost friend. Coffee, steaming in the cold... Within dark cave, a glint of gold. I wish that I could wander here, and view the world through his eyes. It's cozy as a Hobbit's home-- inside of seymour's mind. * * * just because you start my days brighter |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
With each of his poems we do get to wander there daily. And we do get to view the world through his eyes, his heart and his soul. He gives us such gifts! This is well done. Thank you. It is a great idea and a nice tribute. Warm hugs to you, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very good poem Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I would surender my mind to you if I had one. But all that's there is phantoms and fantasies. And these you are welcome to. I feel your breeze each time you tease. If you did anymore I would wheeze. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
chuckling Now you have brought to mind a story... My former physician was quite elderly, and rather deaf, and VERY grumpy. Most of his patients were afraid of him, but I LOVED messing with his head. Since I was always having to repeat myself when he asked me a question...the following conversation ensued: "Are you still smoking?" "Yes." "Are you still smoking?" "YES." "How much do you smoke daily?" "oh..'bout a pack a day." "No, I asked HOW MUCH DO YOU SMOKE?" (He was yelling now--as though it was ME that couldn't hear.) "A PACK A DAY." I hollered back, resisting the urge to scream into his stethoscope." Finally... "Do you wheeze?" "NO---MY NAME IS NOT LOUISE." Methinks he would have forgotten the Hyppocratic Oath long enough to strangle me! and sy? I only hope I bring half as many smiles to your face as you do to mine! |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Sounds comforting! You're awesome Serneity! ~Sheri |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity~ Ah yes...what a wonderful place that would be. "It's cozy as a Hobbit's home-- inside of seymour's mind." It doesn't get much more cozy than that. Loving that reference, my friend. Big HUGS, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-19-2002 04:07 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you and I forgot to add? at the end of my examination? He muttered this: "Your pressure's up." more... well thank you--sherlock!!! gawd i love you all... thank you...all. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Karen, this is soooooo delightful, sweet friend, I can tell Seymour loves this so much as his mind reflects a special Utopia and beauty of innocence and peace that we all yearn to feel as your words reflect such beauty and surreal feelings too! (big hugggsssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I love this tribute you made to Seymour. I simply love the wisdom of the man. I like his replies as well as his talented poetry. Thanks for sharing your poetry, too. You are a delight. Love To All, Ethel |
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