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Between Moonlight and Shadows.....
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Between Moonlight and Shadows..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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What of words, when my heart has no voice What of emotions felt, when given no choice Between moonlight and shadows where lies the night Between kisses and tears, what’s wrong, what’s right How do I keep my eyes, from your vision, blind How do I keep your voice, from haunting my mind Will there ever be a way to feel your touch Will there ever come a day, I don’t ache this much Is there a cure, a magic remedy Is there an answer, to soothe this need in me Must this smoldering passion go unspent Must my love, remain forever unsent And if wishes and dreams are of the same Why are you not here, when I speak your name ~SEA~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sea, I felt this so deeply. Very well written and soooo good to see your words again. You have been missed. Hugs. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There you are, safe and sound in your poetry... and my dear, you have not lost your touch... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
SEA~ This is such a heart-wrenching write. I felt every word of this as I read. I hope all is well with you, my friend. Big hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What of words, when my heart has no voice What of emotions felt, when given no choice Between moonlight and shadows where lies the night Between kisses and tears, what’s wrong, what’s right How do I keep my eyes, from your vision, blind How do I keep your voice, from haunting my mind Will there ever be a way to feel your touch Will there ever come a day, I don’t ache this much ====================== Ahhhhh ... angst and ache wrapped in rhyme .. a moths favorite kind of poetry. So Sea-girlie...got that sod layed  LOLgood to see ya back. No one has ever shown me how to see the world the way I see it now ... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah SEA~How I miss you words when you're not around. Please stay and write more beauty for us.. Love this girlie. ~Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Susan, I know with all my heart there is an answer for He has a plan for all of us and your love shall come and forever answer your hearts desires! (kiss on cheek) I have missed you so much, sweet friend, you are a special friend to us all, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is wonderful, SEA. I sure have missed you. And, I am glad you are back. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Susan, you expressed this longing so powerfully. This is beautiful and very heartfelt. I've known that feeling myself, but have never been able to express it as you just did. Excellent, sweetie!  The stars will shine when I am gone, |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Wow, its amzing how such good poets there are here! I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely Susan. A wonderful write of sadness. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (11-06-2002 10:44 PM).] |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Sweet music to my ears and your answer is clear vision. Thank you. etoodog |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Susan, This is a very sad write. I hope things get better for you soon. Dawn |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Girl I am SO glad to read you, and this is why! Wonderful writing, and is there anyone who can squeeze my heart like you can? Nope |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Nice to see you gal~ This is hauntingly lovely~ Sometimes we have to look in the shadows to find a light to warm our lives~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I missed tis the first go round...glad i caught it |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
This is very, very good! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Outstanding ache in blue. Hope you have a wonderful new year.  SEA |
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