Open Poetry #23 |
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Cemetary Musing |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon ![]() |
Gray stone statues representation of life sand blasted by wind now almost white with no indentation where name and life inscribed, dark of thought now slips clear of feel subsides, as death walks the rows of the country cemetary and the musings of mind are at once extraordinary. But they be musings that die there behind the fence for in the light of life they don't even make sense. WhiteRose (weird I know) "my reflection becomes me" |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, I don't think its weird, for poetry is meant to be a fascinating language, and such wonderful depths are spoken here! (kiss on cheek) I believe even when a poet dies, the spirit, the muse, the essence always lives on and feeds the soil as the epitaphs written on the stone are his or her words forever to be spoken! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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majnu![]()
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
another pastoral piece from you. the initial description of the gravestones is such that it almost feels like a description of the sentinals on Easter Island. it gives a hint of intrigue to the piece. i would suggest however that you try to re-work it into some simple form, just to help tie it together some. the awkwardness of the present form takes away from the spell of the piece. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No, not weird, sombre, yes, but not weird. V-e-r-y i-n-t-e-r-e-s-t-i-n-g..... EA |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you Noah, you are always so kind with your words. majnu, my dear friend, who knows what I was thinking when I wrote this one huh? Thank you for reading, and for responding. ![]() Linda, so that is what they are calling weird now? ![]() |
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