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To Kiss The Stars
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To Kiss The Stars |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA 
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Lost distance, far or small Attentive and wide awake Chanting tunes of a different beat Sweet lovers on a date Hand in hand in twilight nods Blues of light in the night await Reaching perils equal To sweet home awake Awake. Awake! etoodog |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertA~ You don't get a D- on this ! 'Hand in hand in twilight nods' This thought in particular ... gets a big A+ Lovely ... just lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hand in hand in twilight nods~ This is a beautiful line. Well done. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, may you forever dance to the melody of lifes joys and have these moments forever written in the stars for you both! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I love this poem. "Hand in hand in twilight nods" is also my favorite line. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All right already, I'm up! and Smiling! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Robert, a lovely poem with great feeling, also loved that line, keep them coming, much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* beautiful...how do you do it!? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
Beautiful! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Rob, sigh beautiful images here enjoyed the read. I used to make phantoms I could later chase images of all that could be desired then I got tired of counting all of these blessings"h.devoto magazine |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
A very enjoyable read  Dawn |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The sleeper has awaken ... and, in turn, has found this excellent post. Excellent !! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Chanting tunes of a different beat Sweet lovers on a date Hand in hand in twilight nods" truly beautiful lines here, very nice! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!... ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Thats so beautiful!.. I really enjoyed your poem!. Thank you for sharing. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Robert I really loved this one...great work! Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Thank you. I really do appreciate the direction every one has given me here at Passions. etoodog |
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