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bitter blues
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Do damage that you always do.. help me take my stance again? I'll sing the blues I always do... never--will I love again. Eat the bitters. Bite the Blue. say you'll never love again Eating bitters. Blood is blue-- in touch of air she dances through-- (you say) you'll never love again.... Tell me I was wrong and then tell me I was wrong again bitter blues in blood of vein. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is good, Karen. Have you ever wrote Jazz? If not, I'll bet you could!!! Thanks for sharing the "blues". Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome. A lot of expressed emotion. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Radrook Senior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 648 |
Enjoyed the read! God bless! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I agree with Ethel, I think you'd make a great jazz singer and I can imagine you performing like Michelle Shocked or a modern Billie Holiday with the poetry behind the music! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
In touch of air she dances through Magic! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Enjoyed the write, not the mood.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Eating bitters. Blood is blue-- in touch of air she dances through-- (you say) you'll never love again...." ---------------------------------------- Oooh love this Karen.. Mind if I sing along with ya?! ~Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity~ Some heavy emotions here, my friend. Big hugs to you,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very good. I have told myself this. "I will never love again." Believe me, this is true. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was great. As I read it, I imagined you in a nightclub singing it in front of me. "I will never love again" Great thoughts. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow...this one was just one of those things I sang to me...you guys only THINK you think I'm strange... I tend to put on quite a show over here at times.  Thanks for the generous applause... |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
For some reason, this makes me think of something I said to Lori recently. "My parents are going to have a capillary!" Then I realized I meant coronary. Then I realized I didn't care.  How mystic. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mikey...for some reason? that just cracked me up.  That and the fact that I was gonna ask if you were nuts, then I thought it a ludicrous question to ask of a squirrel--then I thought of the old "show em yer nuts" joke--then...  Hugs you. |
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