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Janus-faced (two faces challenge)
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Janus-faced (two faces challenge) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I am dark. I am light. I am a changeling-- twilight. My lips droop then rise again-- the reckoning of days' begin... I am JANUS. I fan faces misconstrued-- of both-- love-spaces eating little tiny bytes so little to distinguish smile from the drone of memory... I grind my teeth within my sleep-- BASTARD.... (tho I gave you birth) Hazard of this love of earth... I pray that you were here with me and we could speak reality-- I drop my jaw in light shadow-- knowing I've opaque in full of all the colors' jubilee'd... I nod my head in gray-- concede... and chew the grain between my teeth wishing I had different place-- Janus...I am...Janus-faced. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (11-04-2002 02:27 AM).] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I sure think this suits you as it seems you always appear (at least to me in my time zone) when the moon appears, but it's sure a good thing you didn't pick Epimetheus, that is a hard one to rhyme with  You rose to this challenge with the serious side of you that is for sure. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Perhaps...it is hypothemus me and Epimetheus? Perhaps it's true we could not rhyme there will be another time where shadows rise where light will beg? Perhaps I'll just go on to bed... but more likely...I will NOT. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
you are Mary - quite contrary and I love all the facets of you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL, you really are blessed with the Spirit of Write. Too bad you weren't a triplet, dear witchygal. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love the spirit of all those who took on the Two Faces challenge. You have so many facets to you, perhaps Three Faces of Serenity, I mean, Eve would have been more appropriate in your case---no, that still would not have been enough faces. --I've got it, the Sybill challenge---I think she had 9 faces! This poem is a delightful addition to the this challenge. Linda/E.A. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
okay that does it - 0ut comes the "Three of Me" and I bet there are more than three if I really looked, being a Gemini - there are more than twins inside of this Canuk for sure. Serenity - you know what - I loves ya both! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You are more light than dark..you've changed since you joined Passions you know. But both faces are beatiful and together make up the total YOU. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Verey good poem... I dont see many of poems like that =) I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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smitty-j Member
since 2002-09-13
Posts 72Florida, USA |
WOW...I love the structure and flow of this, awesome write ya got there Julie |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That is so you! Thank goodness we see most of your light side.  Well, also thank gooness I can't smell that! But every once in a while (actually a lot) we see the little demon in you  Enjoyed the poem! good job!"Sticks and stones will break my bones, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Many gates and doorways here. |
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