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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Today, a bouquet of pampas grass, tinted different colors, looked much like flames of fire and one was even a smoke color, was on the baptistry wall, just behind the communion table. This bouquet inspired the following. Now the word fire in the 3rd line is meant as if to fire a bow, to shoot out. Do any of you know a better word that would be less ambiguous for this context? shoot toward heaven with life fire heaven's reward ©November 3, 2002 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful imagery Cold hands means a warm heart |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I enjoyed this a lot, but as I'm not good at senyru, I'll leave your question to the experts. Dawn |
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