Open Poetry #23 |
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Desert Dogs |
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Wind![]()
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981![]() |
A battered soul, Scrawny from hunger, A misunderstood creature, A lone dog accross the praire Red as the desert's dust, Tough as the cactis' spikes He crys of his sadness, Of his pain. Coyote an arctic hunter, Feelings hidden beneeth a coat of thick fur A misunderstood creature In groups accross the snow White as the snow's glimmer, Grey as the rocky slate He crys of his past Of his pain Wolf A small spirit Mirrors a fox's image A misunderstood creatue Lone under the sun Orange as the heat of the earth, Energyzed with emotion He crys of the present Of his pain Dingo The dogs of the desert unite in soul |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In one long howl... Wind, very haunting. Thank you! |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Liz, thanks for sharing this well-written poem. I like the style you wrote it in, too. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (big hugggsssssss) Oh Liz, this is so very hauntingly beautiful, sweet friend, I love all these dogs of nature and my heart too sympathizes with their cries and the more danger than ever they have to endure! (sigh) This is so well expressed, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Liz, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
You're an amazing writer...This, like a everyone said, is hauntingly beautiful... Thanks for sharing Liz ![]() Are you scared? |
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DawnG![]() ![]()
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I just have to agree that this a beautiful poem. Dawn |
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