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remember me? |
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bryne New Member
since 2002-11-01
Posts 1 |
hello it's me remember? the one you went to when you knew that you couldn't have her the one you laughed with the one who became your best friend the one you saved the one who fell in love with you the one who loves you more why can't things be like before or why can't i hate you what can i do i want to forget but evything reminds me that i had closed my heart but i let you in and my door's still open but i know you wont come |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Bryne! Please check your email for a special greeting! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Welcome to Passions...  ...believe what your heart feels... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Bryne, I  and thathat is an all to familiar poem and I too once could have written something very simiar. Welcome to our family of friends, and please check your email for a surprise you will enjoy. A smile costs you nothing so makes someone rich. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (11-03-2002 09:54 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Bryne, this is such a wonderfully expressive poem, sweet friend, I hope all is alright as I can feel your hear aching in this debut, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Bryne, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bryne, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Bryne, Seems I've been here without really knowing it tonight. This is a wonderful introduction and I can understand and feel your pain. I too think the same thing a lot. Dawn |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!! Loved the poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Welcome to Passions. I have felt this before..and sometimes...they come back through that door. Be strong in being a friend and there are possibilities of greater rewards for it. "two hearts will build the foundation for one point of light |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS IN POETRY I hope you like it here. I enjoyed your poem and hope to read more of your work. Thanks for sharing with us. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to memory lane. Hope that he will remember your heart, too. But if not in the way you wish, at least you can hold onto a sweet memory. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Byrne... Karilea |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Nice poem,.. exsept, its a little short,.. Not saying thats bad, but it also has no catchy words.. Try and put words that sound good together, together!... But its still good.. Nice job!. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is heart-breaking... |
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