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Two Faces |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Two faces have I One to laugh, one to cry Four lips for to kiss In despair or in bliss... Two pair of green eyes One naive, one is wise Each part of the one Take it all, or take none... Pen how you truly feel... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I could not believe my eyes when I read your title. I was just about to post my poem "Two Faces" and with the same theme! Go figure! Oh, well, your's is VERY well done, and the picture was a perfect addition! I guess great minds think alike! haha EA |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
EA....that is really funny!!!! I think YES, you should definitely post yours right away, and also maybe make a challenge to all the other great minds out there to write along the same theme.......what do you think???? Sounds like fun, huh??? Pen how you truly feel... it is a safety-valve for the soul! [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (11-03-2002 05:55 PM).] |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Sometimes the kiss in despair can lead to bliss, others too often the reverse. The eyes naive can wisen, seldom the reverse. Tis all the make-up of this paradox we are. Enjoyed the read. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I enjoyed your take on Two Faces..and it reminded me of an old song by that title..don't recall who sang it *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Sunnyone! Much enjoyed the read and the pic is a perfect compliment. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunnyone, this is beautiful and the picture just sets it off. The reply you gave to Linda is really good. It will be interesting to see all the talented minds of you poets at work on the same theme. I can hardly wait to see it!! Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
fantastic dear one...the visible and the hidden... jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you express yourself so well and in your green eyes there is always love and the beauty of friendship shining to us all! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-03-2002 07:29 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As soon as I saw your reply--and challenge--I posted my own poem entitled "Two Faces". I still think that this was so uncanny how we were posting these at the same time! EA |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is very well done. I like it. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Sunnyone, I enjoyed this poem very much. I found Linda's poem first and had to come read yours after reading hers. Both were very beautiful.  Dawn |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
RSWells...thank you, my friend. Yes, both faces blend into the one, to be used at our whim! nakdthoughts...I seem to recall the same old song, but it's really old and obscure, too. Thank you, my friend! Enchantress...I had such fun making the pic. Actually, I think the pic came first! Thank you, my friend! garysgirl...oh yes, I really do hope that the 'family' sets out to do their own take on our many faces. Thank you, my friend! jwesley...it seems to me that the hidden is sometimes more complex and interesting than the visible, eh? Thank you, dear friend! Noah...I'm so very glad that you liked this one. You may not know it, but you have inspired my thoughts many times here!! Thank you, my friend! Earth Angel...oh, I just loved your faces!!! The experience that we shared on this one just proves the bond that everyone here has, and how strong the forces of thought can be! Thank you, sis! SmartChick...hi there, and I got my MSN back working again, so buzz me, ok? I'm happy that this one gave you a good read, and thank you, too, my friend! Dawn...yes, her poem is wonderful, and the way we clicked on this at the same time was just unbelievable! Thank you, my friend!! Pen how you truly feel... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wonderful, wonderful, Take a bow, Take a bow Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Two faced poets are twice as interesting!  Loved this one, friend. And aren't you glad today you are in my ancestral homeland (Staffordshire), and not in the shake and quake state? |
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