Open Poetry #23 |
With Heart and Soul |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
With Heart and Soul I could have danced all night, but you weren't there. So I brushed aside the missing, and watched you from afar, escaping to a place that lifted me off the floor and into your arms. I heard the memories of young, kept time with those yet to come, with a smile that felled me into the reflections that filled the vacant space beside me. Laughter, music, a little rock and roll, and I was elevated from Yesterday into Tomorrow, a world of you, a world with view and a wait for that kiss of eyes, to find me there. You are my unplanned trip, that I keep pocketed in "almost there" fulfilling the most basic of needs, integrating two worlds apart moving towards one another to bring about a breath of life to one who has fallen. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Maureen, this is so very touching, sweet friend, and may true love always reach out to you with heart and soul and bring you great cheer! (kiss on cheek) This iswonderful, sweet friend, I love it, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautifully said M. much heart within this write...done as only you can... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Maureen I could feel your love and longing through each and every verse but I also felt a little sadness. I wish for you much love and happiness. Take care.....Sue I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins [This message has been edited by Suetang (11-03-2002 04:22 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I love the picture of words that you painted in my thoughts. This is beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Love makes the world go 'round (unkown) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Stunning Maureen! I absolutely love this piece.. into my library it goes! ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah my friend, such words from envoke deep feelings from such as I...loved it... jwesley |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you all...this may seem sad..but I was at a family gathering in Philadelphia last night with Dinner and Dancing...and I had no partner to dance with..so into my mind I went, to let my thoughts lead. *s Not sad at all..just reminiscing about past, present and future joys. ~smiling~ M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'd like to be able to wave a magic wand and deliver the perfect man to bring joy to your life--and your bed!!!---while I'm at it, I could send one to myself as well! Maybe the universe will give us 2 for the price of one! EA |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
haaaaaaa there is no such thing as a perfect man...but you did bring me a smile EA... thank you hugs M |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
EA and M Raising my hand...opps.... no man is perfect, not me anyways.. but any how,,, enjoyed the read M, i can agree with you. Bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks for stopping by Bernie M |
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