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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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Wind howling through the trees Leaves flying through the air like baby tornadoes looking for a place to light... Moon overhead, in it's in-between suits the way I'm feeling on this shattered eve this weary piece of time called night... Tried to sleep but gave in The blankets fall silent to the icy floor landing there ahead of my feet... Stumbled down the narrow stairs knowing full well that someday I'll miss but will you miss me, my sweet? Don't let the lonliness show or the holes where your words hit my heart like knives thrown in a circus act... Dawn's curtain rises, revealing truths friends have deserted, another year gone life hands you the cold hard facts... [This message has been edited by Sunnyone (11-02-2002 07:18 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Sunnyone, this is sooooooo heartfelt, sweet friend, sadly there are sad facts of life that we are only reminded of at dawn but there are also many beautiful truths and may they always outweigh the sad as you count your many blessings and imagine spring fill even the voids of winter! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, you are a very special friend to all our hearts, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Then off to where none can follow.....watch those stairs. Enjoyed. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Noah....your words are always uplifting to me, even in the darkness...I appreciate your friendship, sincerely. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you RS, and the stairs are very menacing....almost like something out of a Stephen King novel! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Would I could I'd be at the bottom of those stairs with arms open to hug you tight, but all I can do is give you a heart-hug from the depths of me...HHHHUUUUUUGGGGG!!!!! jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (11-02-2002 07:28 PM).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
hello jwesley, and it is very good to know that even hypothetically, there's a friend there to soften the landing! Thank you, my friend. |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
The night is cold, the stairs really are steep. I hope that you'll find some way to sleep. Another day brings another dawn, and things look different on a new morn. Nice one !!!! Hubby John XX |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sunnyone, this is a very well-written poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing with us. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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