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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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It’s just the bone Of memory A shank of habit Decomposed Yet another piece of me A jut of sharp in reverie— Exposed… |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
You are amazing...enjoyed much. H. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
H. I should have told ya the story behind this..I am an insomniac, partly because I have trouble "turning off my head" long enough to fall asleep, and then when I finally do, I have nightmares...this was written about a recurring one I have about stumbling into my own grave and falling onto my own bones. sigh. Even my nightmares are textbook cliche'.  But I thank you, as I wipe the sleep from eyes...grateful for the sleep and your reading... |
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WhileIWasGone Member
since 2002-07-18
Posts 486 |
Hugs.... H. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks for explaing, sweet Karen. I hope you get some sleep. It's much needed, I'm sure. Thanks for sharing your talent, Lady. ~~With Love And Hugs To All~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sleep or no sleep... You alway show amazing talent Karen. ~Hugs~ ~Love, like magic, depends on believing.~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
thanks ethel..it's really not as horrifying as it sounds...after you see a re-run so many times it kind of loses its impact..grinning, but the one where I pick up my own head? now THAT one still startles me!  hugs to you ethel! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooops...and thank you enchanting one...sneaking by me like that! brrrr... becareful...you'll startle me! yawning still...geez... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karen, that is some recurring nightmare! How horrible for you! No wonder you have insomnia! I'd not want to sleep either if I were to have a dream such as this on a regular basis! I have found that a sound machine has been the answer to my prayers. I now drop off to sleep within a couple of minutes! ~ May your sleeps be restful, rejuvenating and peaceful ~ Linda |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Teach him how to sing....then lie back, relax and listen to the soothing words... (Clearing my throat) Nope, not Frank Sinatra....sorry.... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) And your wonderful words always expose the depths of your heart, sweet friend, this is "picture perfect." I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
damn...I need to write you a lullaby then get someone to sing it... How bout Steve? Jon? or _ _ _ _ _ ?  |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
What an awesome nightmare! (at least yours has a logical congruity to it) And what an awesome poem to "shank" it with. |
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